Into your life it will creep
It starts when you're always afraid
Step out of line, the man come and take you away -
“Everything has already been thought and said: we can at best express it in different forms.” - Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe (1749-1832), German poet, dramatist.
Abstract
This study offers a four-stage analysis of T. S. Eliot’s Landscapes
poems—New Hampshire, Virginia, Usk, Rannoch by Glencoe,
and Cape Ann—examining their poetic, philosophical, and dialectical
dimensions. Drawing from Owen Barfield’s theory of participation (Saving the
Appearances: A Study in Idolatry, Wesleyan University Press, 1988) ¹ and
Jewel Spears Brooker’s dialectical framework presented in her T. S. Eliot’s
Dialectical Imagination (Johns Hopkins University Press, 2018), the study
traces how Eliot navigates shifting relationships between nature, memory, and
spirit. The progression through close reading, philosophical lens, dialectical
movement, and comparative synthesis reveals the sequence not merely as lyrical
observation but as a metaphysical pilgrimage: from lyrical grief to reverent
surrender, each landscape staging the evolution of poetic consciousness.
Stage I: Close Reading — Imagery, Tone, and Structure
Eliot’s Landscapes unfold as a sequence of spiritual
interiors masquerading as natural vignettes. Each poem carefully modulates
imagery, tone, and structural rhythm to enact not just place but metaphysical
posture.
In New Hampshire, the orchard becomes an Eden
recalled. Children’s voices harmonize with seasonal rhythms—“Cling, swing,
Spring, sing”—but harmony is soon fractured by memory: “Twenty years and the
spring is over.” The lyrical tone surrenders to elegiac disjunction.
Virginia opens with the slow movement of a “red
river,” heat transmuted into silence. Nature is passive—the mockingbird sings
only once, the trees wait. Fragmented syntax echoes emotional immobility. “Iron
thoughts” travel with the speaker, reflecting unrelieved inner turmoil.
In Usk, brevity becomes pilgrimage. Mythic
symbols—the white hart, the white well—are approached with reverent restraint.
The landscape transforms into a chapel: “Lift your eyes / Where the roads dip…”
The tone is contemplative, the structure aphoristic.
Rannoch, by Glencoe invokes a moor stripped of
symbolism. “The crow starves… the stag breeds for the rifle.” Memory becomes a
site of violence, historical silence resisting interpretation.
Cape Ann bursts with birdsong—“Quick quick
quick…”—but cadence leads to surrender. The speaker yields the land to “its
true owner, the sea gull.” Structure and tone converge on silence and release.
Stage II: Philosophical Lens — Barfield and Brooker
Barfield’s theory of participation—a philosophical model of
evolving human perception—helps map Eliot’s poetic consciousness: from original
unity with nature, through modern detachment, into imaginative re-engagement.
Brooker’s dialectical model complements this arc, framing Eliot’s movement from
disjunction through ambivalence to spiritual transcendence.
In New Hampshire, original participation is evoked
and then mourned. The orchard echoes unity, but memory intrudes. The speaker
moves into onlooker consciousness, grieving a vanished mode of knowing.¹
In Virginia, nature becomes backdrop—passive and
still. “Iron thoughts” reinforce isolation. Participation has fully withdrawn.
Usk gestures toward final participation. Myth is
present but not pursued. The poet lifts his gaze, not his hand—a reverent
posture grounded in humility and vision.
Rannoch by Glencoe offers only residual representation. The moor
bears historical pain, but no symbolic comfort. Memory “beyond the bone”
remains unspoken.
Cape Ann culminates in final participation. The speaker follows nature’s rhythm, then surrenders speech. “Resign this land…” signals a release into silent communion.
Stage III: Dialectical Movement — Brooker’s Model
Brooker’s dialectical framework—disjunction, ambivalence,
and transcendence—provides a lens to trace Eliot’s poetic negotiations between
intellect, emotion, and spirit.
New Hampshire holds ambivalence between lyrical
beauty and irretrievable memory. Presence dissolves into cadence; ritual
replaces possession.
In Virginia, movement stalls. Nature waits, the
speaker remains inert. Disjunction dominates, and tension endures without
transformation.
Usk opens toward transcendence. Myth is not seized
but attended. The poet seeks vision, not mastery. Brooker’s theological
poise—engagement through humility—emerges.
Rannoch offers only silence. The dialectic does not
move. Eliot chooses ethical restraint over synthesis. Violence is acknowledged,
not interpreted.
Cape Ann completes the arc. Birds lead, the speaker follows. The “palaver” ends; speech yields to presence. Transcendence arrives not in conquest, but in surrender.
Stage IV: Comparative Synthesis — Poetic and Philosophical Arc
Taken together, the Landscapes chart a metaphysical
pilgrimage. Eliot’s early poems evoke unity only to mourn its loss. His middle
poems inhabit restraint and silence. The final poem yields, releasing
possession and reclaiming perception.
Nature evolves from symbolic Eden (New Hampshire),
through emotional burden (Virginia), to sacred distance (Usk),
historical resistance (Rannoch), and finally, sacramental presence (Cape
Ann). The poetic voice transforms—from speaker to follower, from griever to
pilgrim. Eliot’s dialectic is not a quest for resolution but a journey into
humility. Landscape becomes lens—not to look outward, but inward.
Eliot’s Landscapes are less a journey across regions
than a passage through modes of being. They dramatise how the poetic mind
perceives, carries, questions, and finally surrenders to the world. Nature
remains constant; what changes is the eyes that see it.
Footnote
¹ Owen Barfield, Saving the Appearances: A Study in Idolatry, Wesleyan
University Press, 1988. On original participation: “a dim consciousness that
man and nature were somehow one.”
I found this quite by accident recently, whilst doing a Google search on "no concurrence of bone". Those words were triggered in my memory when discussing with an old friend the last line "And Zero at the Bone" in Emily Dickinson's "A narrow Fellow in the Grass".
Thanks to this random thread of events, the piece now also appears on the T.S.Eliot Society website at www.tseliotsociety.uk
T.S. Eliot reads Landscapes from Don Yorty on Vimeo.
I. New Hampshire
Children's voices in the orchard
Between the blossom- and the fruit-time:
Golden head, crimson head,
Between the green tip and the root.
Black wing, brown wing, hover over;
Twenty years and the spring is over;
To-day grieves and to-morrow grieves,
Cover me over, light-in-leaves;
Golden head, black wing,
Cling,swing,
Spring,sing,
Swing up into the apple-tree.
II. Virginia
Red river, red river,
Slow flow heat is silence
No will is still as a river
Still. Will heat move
Only through the mocking-bird
Heard once? Still hills
Wait. Gates wait. Purple trees,
White trees, wait, wait,
Delay, decay. Living, living,
Never moving. Ever moving
Iron thoughts came with me
And go with me:
Red river river river.
III. Usk
Do not suddenly break the branch, or
Hope to find
The white hart behind the white well.
Glance aside, not for lance, do not spell
Old enchantments. Let them sleep.
"Gently dip, but not too deep,"
Lift your eyes
Where the roads dip and where the roads rise
Seek only there
Where the grey light meets the green air
The hermit's chapel, the pilgrim's prayer.
IV. Rannoch, by Glencoe
Here the crow starves, here the patient stag
Breeds for the the rifle. Between the soft moor
and the soft sky, scarcely room
To leap or to soar. Substance crumbles, in the thin air
Moon cold or moon hot. The road winds in
Listlessness of ancient war,
Langour of broken steel,
Clamour of confused wrong, apt
In silence. Memory is strong
Beyond the bone. Pride snapped,
Shadow of pride is long, in the long pass
No concurrence of bone.
V. Cape Ann
O quick quick quick, quick hear the song sparrow,
Swamp-sparrow, fox-sparrow, vesper-sparrow
At dawn and dusk. Follow the dance
Of goldfinch at noon. Leave to chance
The Blackburnian warbler, the shy one. Hail
With shrill whistle the note of the quail, the bob-white
Dodging the bay-bush. Follow the feet
Of the walker, the water-thrush. Follow the flight
Of the dancing arrow, the purple martin. Greet
In silence the bullbat. All are delectable. Sweet sweet sweet
But resign this land at the end, resign it
To its true owner, the tough one, the sea-gull.
The palaver is finished.
1933-1934