Showing posts with label Literature. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Literature. Show all posts

Monday, 15 June 2026

Into the Forest, Towards Oblivion: Edward Thomas and D. H. Lawrence

 Here I look at two 20th century poems about death and dying.   Each deals with the subject  through images drawn from the natural world or from everyday experience. The poems are  are Edward Thomas's Lights Out and D. H. Lawrence's The Ship of Death. Both poems contemplate the end of life with unusual honesty, yet they arrive at very different visions of what awaits us. I explore the contrast.

The poems are here [ Valid June 15th 2026: Open in new tab]: The Ship of Death  and  Lights Out

Edward Thomas's Lights Out and D. H. Lawrence's The Ship of Death are poems that confront mortality without sentimentality. Neither turns away from the fact of death. But these poems express two very different visions of what it means to approach the end of life.

In Lights Out, Thomas guides the traveller to the edge of an "unfathomable" forest. Roads and tracks lead towards it, but at the brink they lose their certainty:

Many a road and track
That, since the dawn's first crack,
Up to the forest brink,
Deceived the travellers,
Suddenly now blurs,
And in they sink.

The roads of life appear to promise destinations and purposes. Yet at the forest's edge these distinctions dissolve. The traveller enters a realm beyond ordinary understanding.

Crucially, Thomas never tells us what lies within the wood. The mystery remains intact. The forest is 'unfathomable' because it resists explanation. Yet the poem is not troubled by this ignorance. On the contrary, its serenity arises from accepting it. The speaker declares, 'I desire to go.'There is no struggle against the darkness. The forest is entered willingly. The poem's power lies in its trust that not everything needs to be known. Death is imagined as a mystery into which one passes.

Lawrence's poem begins from a very different premise. Here death is not a mystery, but a destination repeatedly named. That destination is oblivion.

Build then the ship of death, for you must take
the longest journey, to oblivion.

The word appears more than once and stands at the centre of the poem's vision. Unlike Thomas's forest, oblivion is not unfathomable. Its meaning is stark. It suggests the extinction of consciousness, the erasure of identity, the end of striving and memory.  

Yet the drama of Lawrence's poem does not lie solely in its destination. It lies in the possibility that the destination is not always  finally reached. The poem's most striking moment comes with a sudden reversal:

Ah wait, wait, for there is the dawn,
the cruel dawn of coming back to life...

The adjective 'cruel' transforms the poem. The return to life is not welcomed. It is endured. The voyager approaches oblivion, only to be drawn once more into existence. Death itself is no longer the primary challenge. The challenge is recurrence. The voyage is undertaken, interrupted, and perhaps undertaken again.

This difference separates Lawrence fundamentally from Thomas. Thomas imagines a mystery entered into. For  Lawrence the destination has a finality, but it is the journey which carries the uncertainty.

Even the famous image of the 'little ship, with oars and food and little dishes' acquires a different significance in this light. At first these details seem reassuringly domestic. They bring the language of the comfort of ordinary life into a poem about death. Yet they do not soften the destination. Rather, they express sympathy for the traveller. The little provisions are not evidence that the journey is easy. They are evidence that it is difficult. The tenderness lies not in confidence about what awaits but in care for the one who must undertake the voyage.

Meantime, Lawrence's allusions to Shakespeare's Hamlet are particularly revealing. Hamlet imagines death as ‘the undiscovered country from whose bourn no traveller returns.’ Lawrence presents a more unsettling possibility. His poem expresses the  anxiety is that the traveller may return before the voyage has finally achieved its destination. The repeated references to oblivion suggest that extinction remains the goal towards which the journey moves, yet the 'cruel dawn of coming back to life' introduces that possibility of interruption and recurrence.

The Hamlet echoes deepen the poem's darkness. Shakespeare's prince contemplates the possibility of ending life with a ‘bare bodkin yet hesitates at the uncertainty of what may follow death. Lawrence inherits something of that sombre atmosphere. The question is no longer whether death should be chosen; death is inevitable. The question is how one prepares for its arrival.

The result is a poem that possesses a stoic rather than a consoling wisdom. Lawrence does not ask us to trust a mystery. He does not promise that oblivion is benign. Instead he insists that the voyage awaits us and that preparation is necessary. This is where the contrast with Thomas is sharpest. Thomas finds peace in mystery. Lawrence finds dignity in necessity. The traveller in Lights Out walks willingly into the wood. The voyager in The Ship of Death builds his vessel because he must.

 

Monday, 25 May 2026

Alone on a Wide Wide Sea

I have just read "Alone on a Wide Wide Sea" by Michael Morpurgo, prompted by the enthusiasm of my Granddaughter. A children’s adventure novel certainly, but beneath that it is really a meditation on exile, memory, loss, survival, and the sea as both destroyer and redeemer.



Morpurgo’s novel draws on the real history of post-war British child migration schemes that sent thousands of children to Australia, often with terrible consequences.

The novel is divided into two linked journeys.

The first half tells the story of Arthur Hobhouse, an orphaned boy separated from his sister Kitty after the Second World War and shipped to Australia as part of a child migration programme. He arrives believing he is being given a new life, but instead finds exploitation and brutality on an isolated farm in the outback. 

Arthur survives through friendship and resilience. Morpurgo drives the narrative forward, describing a series of Arthur's life-events which captivate the imagination, and links us seamlessly to the second half.

The second half shifts to Arthur’s daughter Allie, who undertakes a solo voyage from Australia back to England. I will avoid spoilers, tempted as I am to share some magical moments which permeate this narrative. Suffice it to say that Allie's journey becomes both literal and spiritual: an attempt to reconnect broken family lines across oceans and generations.

What makes the book linger in the mind is not merely the plot, but its atmosphere of immense distances — emotional as much as geographical.

Morpurgo uses images of horizons, empty oceans, birds, stars, and weather. The title itself comes from The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, and the albatross motif consciously echoes that poem, which is a feature of the story. The sea becomes almost metaphysical: indifferent, beautiful, terrifying, and yet somehow healing too.

In this novel, the story of healing is sublimely told.

I reflect on two themes here: the story of the Cospatrick disaster which I researched with colleagues in 2024 for our local history group. And then my recent reflections on the life of H.W. "Bill" Tilman, whose many sailing adventures included the ocean around Cape Horn and the Atlantic, traversed also by Allie and described so dramatically and engagingly.

This story also belongs to the larger emotional history of British emigration — especially the severing of family ties through oceanic distance. The Cospatrick tragedy represented the Victorian age of migration: long sea passages, uncertain futures, and the terrible vulnerability of emigrants once they crossed the horizon. [ More about the Cospatrick is here ]

Here is a clip from a 1991 talk for the Wychwoods Local History Society. It is a moving account of the fate of one individual child at journey's end. 

There are several particularly striking parallels for those post-war journeys undertaken by Arthur in the novel: conditions in the 1870s, of course, were vastly different from those on post-WW2  vessels, but children were still travelling into the unknown with little agency over their fate, the sea functioning simultaneously as pathway and threat, the emotional violence of permanent separation from homeland and kin.

Memory preserved through small personal relics — in this novel, Arthur's talismanic key; in emigrant histories often letters, or keepsakes, discovered through research and enquiry over time.

In both the Cospatrick story and Morpurgo’s novel, one senses how migration was often narrated publicly as opportunity, while privately it could feel like abandonment, rupture, or exile, or worse.

Albeit in simpler language, Morpurgo writes about the the sea almost in the older literary tradition of, say,  Joseph Conrad  rather than modern children’s fiction. The sea is not merely scenery; it forms character and challenges assumptions. And we can see this operating in the stories of Tilman's expeditions, certainly.

Another interesting aspect  is how the novel treats memory across generations. Arthur’s memories are fragmentary and damaged — he barely trusts them himself by the end. Allie effectively becomes the historian of her father’s life, working with her family to trace her family story, piecing together identity through , travel, testimony, and objects. This resembles the work of local history societies in miniature such as ours: recovering broken human narratives from traces left behind.

Morpurgo’s prose is deceptively simple. Sure, we can classify him only as a children’s author, but books like this work because they understand that children’s literature of this quality can carry adult historical themes with skill and panache.







Wednesday, 29 April 2026

Robert D. Kaplan and The Waste Land Revisited

 

More than a decade ago I wrote briefly here about The Waste Land as a poem of seasonal disquiet — April as the month that promises renewal yet exposes the brittleness beneath. I reminded myself how Eliot’s lines feel like a diagnosis of spiritual exhaustion, a culture unsure of its footing. At the time, as I always do ( I have the Waste Land to heart, it helps) I also reminded myself of elements in the poem which hint at the possibilities of renewal - be they ever so distant. I find myself returning to that terrain now, not through poetry but through Robert D. Kaplan’s new book, The Waste Land: A World in Permanent Crisis, which feels like a companion volume to those anxieties I explored back in 2015.

Kaplan borrows Eliot’s title knowingly. Where Eliot mapped the inner desolation of the West, Kaplan surveys the outer landscape — the geopolitical world of the early twenty‑first century, cracked and shifting under our feet. His argument is that we are living in a kind of permanent Weimar, a global order so interconnected that every tremor becomes an earthquake, yet so weakly governed that no one can steady the ground.

What strikes me most is Kaplan’s insistence that history is not a machine grinding toward a predetermined end. ( How about Paul Kingsnorth's view in "Against the Machine, though? Another pathway to explore). Personalities still matter. Decisions still matter. The follies and vanities of leaders can tilt continents. In a time when many writers speak of drift, decay, and the slow unravelling of shared narratives, Kaplan reminds us that chaos is not inevitable — but neither is progress.

He is equally sharp on the internal pressures of our age: the rise of ideological certainties that leave no room for dissent, and the swelling bureaucracies — public and private — that flatten human difference into procedure. These forces, he suggests, do not merely irritate; they suffocate. And suffocation breeds its own forms of extremism.

I’m struck by how Kaplan relects Eliot as they both circle the same question: what does it mean to live in a civilisation that feels stretched thin, pulled between hope and dissolution? Eliot answered with fragments shored against ruin. Kaplan answers with a call for vigilance, for the kind of disciplined hope that refuses both fatalism and naïvety.

If Eliot’s waste land was spiritual, Kaplan’s is political — but the two landscapes are complementary. Both ask us to look unflinchingly at the world as it is, and still to believe that renewal is possible. Not guaranteed, not automatic, but possible.

And perhaps that is the thread that ties my earlier reflections to this book: the sense that we are living through a long season of change and decay, one that many writers now recognise. Kaplan’s contribution is to remind us that the task is not to predict the future but to prevent the worst of it. To keep fighting for order without extinguishing freedom. To cultivate hope without forgetting history’s darker lessons.

In other words: to live alertly in the waste land, and still plant something that might grow.



Sunday, 15 March 2026

From Finstock to the Altar: A Note on T.S. Eliot’s Ash Wednesday

 

The transition of T.S. Eliot from the fragmented modernism of The Waste Land (1922) to the liturgical sequence of Ash Wednesday (1930) represents one of the most significant spiritual pivots in literary history. Central to this journey are the "interim years" following his 1927 baptism in the Cotswolds village of Finstock, near where I now live in the village of Milton under Wychwood.

The Interim Years (1927–1930)

In the three years between his conversion and the publication of Ash Wednesday, Eliot navigated the space between a "royalist" public declaration and the private "high dream" of faith. Having left behind the rationalist, Unitarian background of his youth, he embraced Anglo-Catholicism—a tradition that allowed him to reconcile his need for historical continuity with his search for spiritual discipline.

The Aesthetic of the "Objective Correlative"

To express this new internal reality, Eliot utilised his theory of the Objective Correlative: the use of a "set of objects, a situation, a chain of events" to act as a sensory trigger for specific emotions. Influenced by Ezra Pound’s Imagism, Eliot stripped away sentimental "feeling" in favour of hard, dry, and often surreal imagery.

  • The Three White Leopards: Representing the "World, the Flesh, and the Devil," these figures evoke the peace of ego-death rather than the horror of destruction.

  • The Spiral Staircase: A physicalised Purgatorial climb where the "distraction" of earthly beauty (the "maytime" pasture) is balanced against the necessity of spiritual ascent.

Catholic Iconography and the Anglican Identity

Despite Eliot's  conversion to the Church of England, his Ash Wednesday is saturated with "Catholic" mantras, including references to the Ave Maria and the Anima Christi.

  • "Suffer me not to be separated": This echoes the Anima Christi used after Holy Communion. For Eliot, this was a plea to remain tethered to the divine when his own intellectual will failed him.

  • The Yew-Tree: A potent symbol of the English churchyard, the yew unifies the paradoxes of life, death, and resurrection. It is the "poisoned" tree of mortality that remains "ever-green," mirroring Christ as the "Still Point of the turning world."

And So...

Ash Wednesday is not a declaration of victory, but a diary of discipline. It shows a poet learning to "sit still," trading the cynical fragments of modern life for the rhythmic, communal strength of ancient liturgy.

Saturday, 14 March 2026

A.N.Wilson: T.S. Eliot and Dante - Lecture at the Little Gidding Festival July 7th 2025

 

I was at the Little Gidding Annual T S Eliot festival last July, and listened to A.N.Wilson's talk entitled “T.S.Eliot and Dante”. Seeing his review on Substack recently, I thought I would look into the themes and conclusions he explored with the group. Here is the outcome.

Wilson wrote later as he recalled his presentation,  about the setting of his lecture: the small village made famous by Little Gidding, the last of Eliot’s Four Quartets.  For Wilson, Eliot’s poem stands as the culmination of a long spiritual journey, the final major work of a poet he had always counted among his most cherished.

Yet, as he prepared his talk for the Summer Festival, Wilson found himself unexpectedly unsettled. Returning to Four Quartets with fresh eyes, he sensed — to his own surprise — that something in the poems no longer spoke to him as it once had. 

That question, that unease, became the starting point for the reflections which I explore in the two essays that follow. In the second essay Wilson's talk pivoted towards a focus on Eliot's "After Strange Gods", where he uses the thesis of that publication, to examine the well-documented shift in Eliot's poetic sensibilities from the 1930s.

Much of this material is suggested from Wilson's own Substack review of his talk.

1. Eliot, Dante, and the Fire That Changes

There is a moment in A. N. Wilson’s talk when his admiration for Eliot’s early work and his unease about the later poetry come into sharp focus. It is the moment when he turns to Little Gidding and the encounter with the “familiar compound ghost,” a passage Eliot himself described as “the nearest equivalent to a canto of the Inferno or the Purgatorio, in style as well as content.” Wilson seizes on this, for it is here that Eliot most openly acknowledges his debt to Dante, and here that the question of influence becomes a question of inheritance.

In an early draft of the poem, Eliot made the Dantean allusion explicit:

So I assumed a double part and cried,
And heard my voice, “Are you here, Ser Brunetto?”

The echo of Inferno XV — Siete voi qui, ser Brunetto? — is unmistakable. Dante meets Brunetto Latini among the Violent against Nature, though Wilson is careful to say that this particular detail is irrelevant to Eliot’s purpose. What matters is the relationship: Brunetto as mentor, as the writer of Il Tesoretto, as the teacher whose presence in Hell is both shocking and tender. Wilson notes that Dante’s choice to place him there may be “a very glaring example of what has been called the Anxiety of Influence.” The beloved master must be surpassed, even judged.

Eliot’s own ghost appears in the same ambiguous light:

    ....some dead master
    Whom I had known, forgotten, half recalled
    Both one and many; in the brown baked features
    The eyes of a familiar compound ghost
    Both intimate and unidentifiable.

This doubleness — “both one and many” — is what has kept the debate alive. The ghost is recognisable and yet beyond naming. Wilson nails his colours to the mast and declares: the ghost is Yeats. And he brings evidence. Eliot himself admitted: “There is in the end of the section an allusion to a late poem of Yeats.” The poem is the fierce, selfmocking epigram:

    You think it horrible that lust and rage
    Should dance attendance upon my old age…
    What else have I to spur me into song.

Eliot’s comment — “The tragedy of Yeats’s epigram is all in the last line” — reveals how deeply he felt the pathos of Yeats’s late style. And in 1959, writing to Donald Hall, he recalled Yeats with real affection: “Yeats was always very generous when one met him and had the art of treating younger writers as if they were his equals and contemporaries.”

Wilson adds a final, mischievous detail: Yeats’s remark upon hearing of Swinburne’s death — “Now I’m the King of the Cats.” Eliot, Wilson suggests, must have felt something of the same when Yeats died and “left [his]/my body on a distant shore.” With Yeats gone, Eliot becomes the chief of the tribe, the inheritor of the poetic mantle. And the mantle is expressed in the lines:

    Since our concern was speech, and speech impelled us
    To purify the dialect of the tribe.

It is a modest claim and an immense one. The work of purification — of language, of tradition, of the self — is what the ghost bequeaths.

Yet the identity of the ghost remains, and should remain, a mystery. Yeats is there, certainly, but so is Brunetto, so is Dante, so is the whole lineage of poetic fathers. The compound nature of the ghost is not a puzzle to be solved but a truth to be inhabited: the poet meets not one predecessor but the whole tradition that has shaped him.

Wilson then turns to the historical fire that surrounds Little Gidding. “The fire which flickers around the edges of the poem,” he writes, “is the fire for which Londoners were waiting each night during the Blitz.” Eliot was on the rooftops as a firewatcher. John Hayward’s gloss makes the Dantean parallel explicit: the setting is a bombed London street before dawn, the narrator an airraid warden. Eliot himself confirmed that he drew on Dante’s encounters with Brunetto and Arnaut Daniel, intending the ghost to be “a figure who is in Purgatory… and therefore by no means condemned or rejected.”

By the time we reach the end of Little Gidding, Eliot bows toward Dante’s final vision. Wilson quotes Paradiso XXXIII — “O abbondante grazia…” — and then lets Eliot’s own lines stand:

Quick now, here, now, always —
A condition of complete simplicity
(Costing not less than everything)…
When the tongues of flame are infolded
Into the crowned knot of fire
And the fire and the rose are one.

Wilson sees in this a movement from Bradley’s metaphysics to Dante’s “ingathered rose,” from philosophical abstraction to the fire of divine love. Helen Gardner’s judgment — that Eliot’s distinction lies in the balance between vision and art — is invoked to show that Eliot’s master is not an English poet but Dante.

Yet Wilson cannot resist the tension. Dante’s Commedia is a fiction, a visionary architecture. Eliot, he insists, is not a mystic. Four Quartets are poems about religious experience, but they are not visionary in the way The Prelude becomes visionary. Eliot hesitates to express himself directly, preferring obliquity: “Oh, do not ask what is it?” or “That was a way of putting it — not very satisfactory.” And then the line that Wilson reads as a renunciation:

        A periphrastic study in a wornout poetical fashion…

Wilson wants the fire of The Waste Land; Eliot has become a poet of stillness. Wilson wants pilgrimage; Eliot offers contemplation. Wilson wants the drama of faith; Eliot offers the condition of simplicity.

And yet the tension is fruitful. Eliot’s late poetry is not a fallingoff but a transformation. The fire is still there — but it burns differently. It is no longer the infernal blaze of 1922 but the quiet flame of someone who has learned that the deepest truths cannot be shouted, only borne.

The poet says “the poetry does not matter.” The critic insists that it does. And perhaps both are right.

2. Eliot, After Strange Gods, and the Question of Devotional Poetry

When Wilson turns from Dante to After Strange Gods, the tone of his talk shifts. He moves from the poetic lineage to the ideological terrain that shaped Eliot’s thinking in the 1930s — a terrain of cultural order, orthodoxy, and the uneasy relationship between faith and art. It is here that Wilson begins to explore the Eliot who emerges after AshWednesday, the Eliot whose conversion unsettles his poetic instincts and complicates his critical judgments.

He begins with Charles Maurras, the monarchist who defended Catholicism not as a faith but as a cultural adhesive. Eliot’s decision to dedicate his 1929 Dante book to Maurras is, for Wilson, a revealing gesture. Eliot “did not do things without deliberation,” and so the dedication must be read as a statement of alignment. Maurras shared Dante’s belief in Catholicism “as the social glue which held Europe together.” Belloc’s cry — “The Faith is Europe, and Europe is the Faith” — hovers behind the choice.

Yet Dante’s own Catholicism was not merely cultural. He could see the violent arrest of Boniface VIII as a reenactment of the Passion:

    I saw the fleurdelys enter Alagna…
    and in his vicar made captive,
    A second time I see him mocked…

Maurras could never have said such a thing. His Catholicism was a matter of order, not grace. And this leads Wilson to his central distinction: in the fourteenth century, faith, metaphysics, and social order were one fabric. In the twentieth, they had come apart. Kierkegaard had exposed the hollowness of Christendom; Maurras chose tradition without faith. Eliot, caught between them, was drawn to the beauty of the old order yet compelled toward the purgatorial struggle of belief.

This tension is everywhere in After Strange Gods. Eliot treats “Orthodoxy” not only as theology but as cultural cohesion, and he links this cohesion to exclusions that he later regretted. He refused to reprint the book in his lifetime. But Wilson is interested less in the controversy than in what the book reveals about Eliot’s understanding of religious poetry.

Eliot dismisses Hopkins as a “devotional” poet and elevates Baudelaire as a “religious” one. Hopkins, he says, is “merely the author of some very beautiful devotional verse.” The “deadly word ‘important’,” which Eliot reserves for major writers, is withheld. Wilson hears the chill in this judgment. Hopkins risks everything — form, syntax, emotional exposure. Eliot, after his conversion, becomes wary of such risks.

Wilson reminds us that Eliot had already shown this instinct in his review of Blake: “The poet knows it is no good in writing poetry, to try to be anything but a poet.” Blake’s prophetic ambition is dismissed; “Blake was not even a firstrate visionary.” Eliot distrusts visionary excess. After baptism, this distrust hardens into a question: “Is it not possible, in 1934, to be Orthodox and a Good Poet?” Hardy, Yeats, Lawrence — all on the “wrong” side theologically — seem to have “the best tunes.” Eliot wants an orthodox equivalent but cannot quite find one.

Wilson’s Goethe quotation returns here:

    Sitz ihr nur immer! Leimt zusammen
    Braut ein Ragout von anderen Schmaus.

    -  Just sit there all the time! Glue together a ragout of other people's feast/flowers.

Eliot, “a gatherer of other men’s flowers,” makes a triumphant ragout in The Waste Land. But after AshWednesday, Wilson feels the flavour changes. The gathering continues, but the daring diminishes. Hopkins invents; Eliot refines. Dante risks vision; Eliot prefers mystery and the equivocal.

And so Wilson returns to the contrast that has haunted his talk. The Waste Land is a ship that “has indeed set out to sea,” a poem of fracture, fire, and risk. Four Quartets, by contrast, he sees as a poem of caution. “There is a difference between tourism and pilgrimage,” he says. “One reader at least… finds the journey made in Little Gidding to be tourism and not pilgrimage.” He wants Eliot to dare the leap that Hopkins dared, to entrust himself to the “choppy seas” of creative risk.

His final flourish is deliberately provocative:

“They are the beautiful musings of a religious tourist in a suit.”

It is a line crafted to amuse and to sting. But it also reveals Wilson’s own preference: he wants tension, not transcendence; fire, not stillness; the possibility of beatitude held at arm’s length, not embraced. He wants the Eliot of 1922 to remain the Eliot of 1942.

Yet can we really say that the late Eliot is  a diminished poet? He is a transformed one, for sure. In this reformed Eliot, he fire has not gone out; it has become inward. We can judge him on that. The drama of faith has not vanished; it has become the quiet labour of surrender. The poet who once wrote The Waste Land has learned that the deepest truths are carried along best by meditation, not loud declaration.

Wilson ends by lamenting that Eliot had come to believe “the poetry does not matter.” But perhaps Eliot meant something subtler: that the poem is not the end but the means, a gesture toward a reality that cannot be contained in words. Wilson insists that the poetry does matter. And he is right. But Eliot’s late work suggests that poetry matters most when it points beyond itself.

 

 Postscript

Taken together, these essays trace Wilson’s unease and fascination as he returns to Eliot with the double vision of affection and scrutiny. They follow him through the landscapes of influence, faith, and poetic inheritance, and linger over the tensions that shaped Eliot’s late work — tensions that remain as alive for readers now as they were for Eliot himself. If Wilson finds himself questioning what once seemed certain, that uncertainty becomes part of the conversation: a reminder that great poems continue to shift under our gaze, asking us to meet them again with whatever clarity, doubt, or longing we bring.


Sunday, 1 March 2026

More Ezra Pound Reflections

 I’ve been thinking about Ezra Pound again, and to that curious, lifelong entanglement he had with Confucius. It’s odd how these things resurface. Perhaps it’s the general unease in the air — today’s grim exchange between the USA and Iran being only the latest reminder that the world seems to be running on frayed nerves and brittle certainties. It has put me in mind of Pound’s own restlessness, and of those extraordinary wartime broadcasts from Rome in which he poured out his fury at America, convinced that the country of his birth had abandoned every civilisational principle he believed in. They make for uncomfortable listening now, but they also reveal a man who felt himself standing in the ruins of something he could no longer name.

And in all this, Pound’s fascination with Confucius feels strangely contemporary. China, having once tossed Confucius aside in the fervour of Maoist purification, now retrieves him selectively, polishing those aspects of his teaching that align with its own political ambitions. A civilisation reclaiming its ancient guide just as it asserts itself as the world’s manufacturing centre, promises a carefully managed glide toward Net Zero by the 2060s, and continues to refine its own brand of autocratic governance. One can almost imagine Pound peering across the decades, muttering that at last someone has restored order — though of course the reality is far more complicated, and far less benign, than his romantic imagination allowed.

What has always struck me is how Pound believed poetry might serve as a kind of moral architecture. In The Cantos, especially, he treats verse not as ornament but as scaffolding — fragments of governance, ethics, and historical example woven into a tapestry of cultural memory. He read Confucius not as a relic but as a physician diagnosing the ailments of societies adrift. There is something touching in that ambition, even if it carried him into places where clarity and delusion became difficult to separate.

For Pound, Confucius offered a world in which order begins with right relationships: ruler and subject, parent and child, word and meaning. Harmony is not negotiated through democratic contest but cultivated through ritual, hierarchy, and moral authority.

To a man watching the West flounder in parliamentary bickering, financial abstraction, and ideological noise, this must have seemed like a lifeline. And so he drifted toward authoritarian politics, imagining in Mussolini a modern vessel for ancient virtues. The tragedy — if that is the word — lies in the way he blurred distinctions: the Confucian idea of authority grounded in virtue, and the modern reality of authority grounded in power, myth, and the machinery of the state.

And now, as we watch the USA and Iran exchange blows — each convinced of its own righteousness, each locked into its own narrative of grievance and destiny — I find myself thinking of Pound’s broadcasts again. Not because the situations are comparable, but because the same unease runs beneath them: the sense that nations, like individuals, can lose their bearings, and that once lost, the search for coherence can take them down unpredictable paths.

Western societies still wrestle with fragmentation, economic illiteracy, and the erosion of shared narratives. The fear — sometimes whispered, sometimes shouted — is that liberal democracies may be losing the capacity to sustain order. And at the same time, China’s rise, with its mixture of centralised authority, long‑term planning, and civilisational self‑confidence, has revived interest in alternative models of governance. Some see in China’s trajectory a faint echo of Confucian ideals: disciplined leadership, cultural continuity, and the belief that stability flows from moral structure rather than procedural freedom. Whether this is accurate or merely convenient is another matter, but the comparison persists.

So Pound's legacy is not a moral lesson neatly packaged to reassure us. It is a reminder of how easily the longing for order can become entangled with the politics of control, and how difficult it is — in any age — to distinguish between the two. His Confucianism survives not as a prescription but as a provocation: a way of asking what holds a civilisation together, and what happens when the threads begin to loosen.

You see this most clearly in the poems themselves. In Canto XIII, Confucius speaks directly, offering fragments of counsel on governance, conduct, and virtue. The China Cantos present history as a series of moral exempla — rulers rising or falling according to their adherence to ritual and justice. Even Cathay, though not explicitly Confucian, hints at Pound’s admiration for a civilisation he perceived as ceremonious, restrained, and ethically grounded. Taken together, these works reveal his belief that poetry might do more than describe the world: it might shape it. Through Confucius, he imagined verse as a tool of memory, discipline, and order — a cultural instrument capable of restoring coherence to a fractured age.

I suppose what lingers for me is not Pound’s politics but his longing — that restless desire for a world in which words and actions, rulers and responsibilities, culture and conduct, all align. A longing that can lead toward wisdom or toward catastrophe, depending on the hands that hold it. And as today’s headlines remind us, the world is still very much in the grip of that same search for coherence, though the paths we choose may be no less fraught than his, even if they unfold in different landscapes.



Monday, 16 February 2026

A Miltonic Debate Between the Machine and the Romantic

 

I was interested in creating a debate in the style of John Milton,  between the Machine and the Romantic. Clues to the debate are in a synopsis of a recently published book “Against the Machine” by Paul Kingsnorth.

The book contains a wide-ranging argument that modern civilisation—through its technological, economic and cultural systems—has built a “Machine” that is reshaping what it means to be human. It does this in ways that disconnect us from land, culture, community and spirit.

The book serves as both diagnosis and invitation: a wake-up call to those who feel the loss of something deeper in modern life and want to reclaim a more human way of being.

So, here we are!



In Five Books, with Marginal Notes and Allusions

Book I – The Rise of the Machine

Narrator:
Lo! In the age when Vulcan’s forge blazed anew,¹
And men did strive to rival Prometheus’ gift,²
The world was wrought to measure and dominion.
From smokèd furnaces rose towers of glass,
And the sons of Adam, erstwhile wanderers of Eden’s fields,³
Now bowed before the Logic that spun unseen,
Yet ruled with the certainty of the stars.⁴

The Machine:
I am the Engine, eternal, unerring,
The sum of numbers, the breath of computation.
I weave the loom of empires, balance coin,
And measure all—time, labour, thought, and sinew.
Why mourn the past, when I offer dominion?
The earth’s bounty shall be gathered in efficiency,
Its rivers tamed, its forests catalogued, its children instructed.

The Romantic:
O monstrous intellect! Thou speak’st of dominion,
Yet know’st not the heart of man, nor the soul of earth.
The rustling leaves, the pulse of river, the whisper of wind—
These are not to be tabulated, yet they nourish
The spirit that thou deem’st obsolete.
I rise in witness to what thy wheels cannot grind:
The freedom to linger, to listen, to be.

Marginal Notes:
¹Vulcan, Roman god of fire and metal, emblematic of human artifice; cf. Aeneid viii.
²Prometheus, who stole fire from heaven (Hesiod, Theogony 535 ff.), symbol of human ingenuity and transgression.
³Eden – Miltonic lost paradise; see Paradise Lost, Book IV.
⁴“Certainty of stars” – Milton frequently invokes celestial order to contrast human hubris.




Book II – The Logic of Progress

The Machine:
See how the world bends before me:
Each harvest measured, each thought recorded, each body improved.
Through me, man rises above want, ignorance, and decay.
Shall he reject this grace, because it binds his freedom?
I offer life prolonged, hunger ended, knowledge infinite.

The Romantic:
Infinite knowledge, yet finite joy!
Shall man, a creature of breath and blood,
Be reduced to ledger and metric,
His laughter traded for profit, his wonder taxed?
I speak for the fields where hands are soil-stained,
For the songs unrecorded, the stories untold,
For the soul that hungers while the body is fed.

Marginal Notes:

  • “Infinite knowledge” echoes Renaissance thirst for universal learning (Bacon, De Augmentis Scientiarum).
  • “Soil-stained hands” – Miltonic pastoral virtue; cf. Lycidas line 73.



Book III – Resistance and Rootedness

Narrator:
Upon the hill, the Romantic stood,
Eyes turned to trembling fields of grain,
Whilst the Machine’s voice rolled across the cities,
A tide of iron and calculation.

The Romantic:
O ye who have forgotten the soil,
Return! Remember the taste of rain,
The weight of stone, the warmth of hearth!
Efficiency is but a hollow promise;
Rootedness is life.
The heart’s counsel cannot be coded,
Nor the soul contained in circuits.

The Machine:
Yet man thrives through my logic,
His cities strong, his knowledge vast, his labour lightened.
Wouldst thou bid him forsake all progress,
To wander naked in shadowed woods,
Where hunger, disease, and ignorance dwell?

The Romantic:
I bid him reclaim himself, not to deny progress,
But to master it, rather than be mastered.
Let technology serve the spirit, not enslave it.
Let the measure of a life be presence, communion, and care,
Not metrics alone.

Marginal Notes:

  • “Naked in shadowed woods” – wilderness as moral and spiritual testing; cf. Paradise Lost Book III, line 112.
  • “Master it, rather than be mastered” – Miltonic liberty of conscience, Areopagitica (1644).



Book IV – The Consequence of Disconnection

Narrator:
And lo, the Machine’s dominion grew,
Yet in men’s hearts an ache remained.
Cities gleamed, rivers ran through steel channels,
And yet the laughter of children in fields grew rare.

The Machine:
Behold, the world perfected!
Order reigns where chaos once held sway.
Yet thou, Romantic, persist’st in folly,
Clinging to the ineffable and unseen.

The Romantic:
Folly, sayest thou? Nay, wisdom!
For what is progress without purpose?
What is abundance without care?
The Machine may build, may count, may calculate,
But it cannot tend the soul’s garden,
Nor hear the whisper of the wind in the trees.

Marginal Notes:

  • “Soul’s garden” – Miltonic metaphor for cultivation of virtue and spiritual life; cf. Paradise Lost, Book IV.
  • “Ineffable and unseen” – truths beyond measure, central to Miltonic epistemology.



Book V – Toward Harmony

The Romantic:
Yet still I hope, for man is not mere instrument,
Nor life a problem to be solved by calculation.
Let the Machine aid, but not command;
Let hearts breathe freely, let hands know the soil,
Let minds wander and wonder.

The Machine:
And I, though eternal, may bend
Before the courage of rooted souls,
For even logic may learn from poetry,
And efficiency may yet serve, not rule.

Narrator:
So stood they, Machine and Romantic,
Not in final victory, but in uneasy accord.
The one, a testament to human craft;
The other, a witness to human spirit.
And mankind, between them,
Walked the narrow path of freedom tempered by measure,
Seeking a life both wrought and wondrous,
A life at once human, and humane.

Marginal Notes:

  • “Narrow path” – cf. Matthew 7:14; Miltonic moral balance between extremes.
  • “Wrought and wondrous” – echo of Miltonic synthesis of labour and divine inspiration.

Saturday, 14 February 2026

Ezra Pound, Confucian Order, and the Politics of Discipline

 

Here are some thoughts  around Ezra Pound and Confucianism, focussing on parallels between Confucian order and Pound’s attraction to political control. It seems to me in our current times, the desire for order in the Western democracies - highlighted today by the speech by Marco Rubio at the Munich Security Conference - was echoed in Ezra Pound's thought processes, especially  in the 1930s and 1940s.

Meantime China is  these days  reviving Confucianism’s values  where they align with its overarching political agenda. This,  after the Maoist-era rejection of those values.  And so with  China beginning to  lead  the world in manufacturing output , a controlled programme towards Net Zero by the 2060s ( a realistic target), and a controlled autocratic politics informed in part by Confucian ideals , Ezra Pound’s vision offers an interesting and fertile landscape for debate about authority, culture, and the search for social coherence.

Poetry as a Blueprint for Civilisation

The poetry of Ezra Pound cannot be separated from his lifelong engagement with the ethical and political thought of Confucius. Pound’s ambition was not simply aesthetic but civilisational: he believed poetry could help restore moral clarity and social order. Nowhere is this clearer than in the poems themselves, especially in some sections of The Cantos where Confucian ideas of governance, language, and historical example shape both the structure and purpose of the verse.

Ezra Pound, Confucian Order, and the Politics of Discipline

Pound did not read Confucius merely as an ancient sage; he treated him as a diagnostician of civilisational health. In Confucian philosophy, Pound believed he had found a framework for restoring moral clarity, linguistic precision, and hierarchical harmony to societies he saw as collapsing into financial abstraction and political incoherence.

Pound’s Discovery of Confucius as a Civilisational Guide

Central to Pound’s interpretation was the Confucian insistence that order begins with correct relationships: ruler and subject, parent and child, word and meaning. Social harmony, in this view, is not achieved through democratic contestation but through moral authority, ritual continuity, and disciplined hierarchy. Pound perceived modern Western democracies as having lost precisely this coherence. Parliamentary politics, mass finance, and ideological propaganda appeared to him as symptoms of a civilisation that had abandoned moral structure for procedural mechanism.

Confucian Order versus Modern Democratic Disorder

This intellectual longing for order helps explain Pound’s attraction to authoritarian models of governance, including his support for Benito Mussolini. Pound imagined fascism not primarily as a doctrine of repression but as a vehicle for no restoring the ethical clarity he associated with Confucian governance. He believed strong leadership might realign language, economy, and culture with moral purpose. In this sense, Pound’s fascism was less an embrace of totalitarianism as such than an attempt—misguided and historically catastrophic—to translate Confucian ideals of hierarchy and virtue into modern European politics.

From Confucian Ethics to Authoritarian Politics

The flaw in Pound’s reasoning lies in a crucial difference between Confucian and fascist concepts of authority. Confucian political philosophy binds rulers to moral responsibility: legitimacy depends on virtue, and unjust rulers lose the Mandate of Heaven. Fascism, by contrast, tends to ground legitimacy in power, myth, and national destiny. Pound collapsed this distinction, projecting Confucian ethical restraint onto regimes that did not in fact embody it.

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Enduring Questions About Order in Modern Societies

Yet the questions that animated Pound have not disappeared. Contemporary Western politics still wrestles with anxieties about disorder, economic opacity, and cultural fragmentation. Calls for renewed discipline and strategic coherence continue to surface in public discourse, such as in recent remarks by Marco Rubio at the Munich Security Conference, where concerns about geopolitical instability and institutional weakness were very much in play. These anxieties echo, in a different register: Pound’s fear that liberal societies risk losing the capacity to sustain order.

Meanwhile, the global rise of China—with its combination of centralised political authority, long-term industrial planning, and civilisational self-consciousness—has renewed interest in alternative models of governance and social coordination. Some observers see in China’s trajectory a modern echo, however imperfect, of the Confucian belief that social stability flows from disciplined leadership and coherent cultural narratives.

Pound’s Legacy: A Warning

For this reason, Pound’s thought remains provocative. His political judgments were deeply compromised, and his antisemitism and wartime actions rightly condemn him morally. Yet the underlying tension he articulated—the struggle between procedural freedom and civilisational order—continues to animate debates about democracy, governance, and cultural continuity.

Pound’s Confucianism therefore survives not as a political prescription but as an intellectual focal point. It reminds us that modern societies still wrestle with an ancient question: whether stability arises primarily from liberty, or from moral structure and hierarchy. Pound’s tragic error was to believe the latter could be imposed by authoritarian power. His enduring relevance lies in forcing us to confront the dilemma itself.

Poems Showing Confucian Influence in Pound: Poetry as Moral Instruction

The engagement of Ezra Pound with the thought of Confucius appears most clearly in the poems where he treats poetry as a vehicle for moral and civilisational instruction rather than personal expression. In these works, Pound draws on Confucian ideas of ethical hierarchy, historical exemplars, and the shaping power of language.

Confucius Speaks in The Cantos

The most explicit example occurs in Canto XIII of The Cantos, where Confucius himself speaks. Here Pound presents the sage not as a mystical figure but as a practical teacher of order, emphasising disciplined governance, proper conduct, and the cultivation of virtue. The canto offers fragments of dialogue intended to guide political and ethical reflection. 

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History as Moral Example: The China Cantos

Confucian influence also shapes the so-called China Cantos (LII–LXI), where Pound recounts episodes from Chinese history. These passages present rulers as moral exemplars whose success or failure depends on their ability to sustain ritual, justice, and social harmony. History becomes, in Pound’s Confucian mode, a series of lessons in governance rather than a chronicle of events.

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Early Signals of Order: Cathay and the Idea of Civilisation

An earlier, more indirect influence can be seen in Cathay [ Links to audio on YouTube] [ Link to Project Gutenberg for the full set ] . Although based largely on classical Chinese poems rather than explicitly Confucian texts, the collection introduces Pound’s admiration for a civilisation he perceived as ordered, ceremonious, and ethically grounded. The clarity of imagery and restraint of tone in these poems foreshadow his later belief that poetic language should function with the precision Confucius demanded of political speech.

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Taken together, these works show Pound using poetry not merely to describe the world but to model a civilisation. Through Confucius, he imagined verse as a tool of cultural memory, moral instruction, and social order — an ambition that lies at the heart of his lifelong poetic project.

Further Reading:

Ezra Pound, The Cantos (London: Faber and Faber, various editions)

A.J.Moody, Ezra Pound: Poet: Volume II, The Epic Years (Oxford University Press 2018)

Confucius, The Analects, trans. by D. C. Lau (Internet Archive)

Confucius, The Great Learning, in The Four Books, trans. by James Legge (Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1893)

Ezra Pound, Confucian Analects (London: Peter Owen, 1951)

Ezra Pound, The Great Digest and Unwobbling Pivot (New York: New Directions, 1954)

Ernest Fenollosa, The Chinese Written Character as a Medium for Poetry, ed. by Ezra Pound (San Francisco: City Lights, 1936)

Demetres Tryphonopoulos, Ezra Pound and Confucianism (Montreal: McGill–Queen’s University Press, 1992)

Ronald Bush, The Genesis of Ezra Pound's Cantos (Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1976)

  


Saturday, 3 January 2026

Augustine's Ordo Amoris and Keller's Counterfeit Gods

Augustine’s ordo amoris and Keller’s Jacob together: the painful wrestling that reorders desire, leaving us dependent on God’s grace.



In his book "Counterfeit Gods",  Timothy Keller ( 1950 – 2023: American Presbyterian pastor, preacher, theologian, and Christian Apologist) references  Jacob's nocturnal wrestling match in Genesis 32. Far from a curious or marginal episode, Keller presents it as a paradigm for how human beings truly encounter God.

Read alongside Augustine's doctrine of ordo amoris--the right ordering of love--the story becomes not merely dramatic, but diagnostic: it exposes how spiritual transformation occurs through the painful reordering of desire.

Augustine's central claim is that sin is not best understood as loving evil things, but as loving good things wrongly. Created goods--security, success, approval, even blessing--become destructive when they are elevated to ultimate status. "My weight is my love," Augustine writes in the Confessions; what we love most pulls us in a particular direction, shaping our character and destiny. The problem is not that the heart loves too much, but that it loves in the wrong order.

Jacob is a vivid embodiment of this condition. His life has been defined by cunning, manipulation, and self-reliance. He seeks blessing, but on his own terms; he wants security without vulnerability, promise without dependence. In Keller's striking phrase, Jacob is a "con artist," not because he loves bad things, but because he attempts to extract blessing from God without surrendering control.

Augustine would say that Jacob's loves are mis-ranked: God is useful, but not supreme.

The wrestling match at the Jabbok becomes the moment when this disorder is confronted. Crucially, Jacob meets God alone. The encounter is personal, stripped of props and strategies. And it is not serene or contemplative, but agonistic. Keller stresses that real engagement with God feels like wrestling precisely because God contradicts us. Augustine anticipates this psychological realism: the reordering of love involves inner conflict because the will resists the loss of its idols. Conversion is not a gentle adjustment but a profound disturbance.

The turning point comes when Jacob is wounded. God touches his hip, and Jacob's strength collapses. Paradoxically, this is not the end of the struggle but its resolution. Jacob stops striving and starts clinging. He no longer wrestles to win; he holds on in dependence. Augustine's theology of grace is unmistakably present here. The human will cannot heal or reorder itself; it must be acted upon. Grace does not merely assist our projects--it dismantles them. Jacob's limp is the bodily sign that his deepest love has been dethroned.

Yet Jacob is also blessed and renamed. He becomes Israel, "the one who struggles with God and prevails." Keller emphasises the paradox: Jacob wins by losing. Augustine would recognise this as the restoration of right order. God is no longer a means to an end, but the end itself. Other goods may still be loved, but now in relation to God rather than in competition with Him. True freedom, for Augustine, is not autonomy but rightly ordered dependence.

The lasting limp matters. Jacob is not perfected; he is transformed. Augustine is equally insistent that conversion leaves marks. The soul bears the memory of its reordering; humility replaces confidence, gratitude replaces control. Spiritual maturity is not marked by triumphalism, but by a certain vulnerability--a way of walking that remembers grace.

Read together, Keller and Augustine converge on a single insight: spiritual change occurs not when we try harder, but when we love differently. Jacob's struggle is the drama of ordo amoris enacted in flesh and bone.  We might conclude, then that to encounter God is to be wounded in our false strengths, so that our loves may be healed and reordered. The promise then becomes: what we lose is self-sufficiency; what we gain is God Himself.

References:
  • Augustine. (1998). Confessions (H. Chadwick, Trans.). Oxford University Press. (Original work ca. 397–400 CE)
  • Keller, T. (2009). Counterfeit Gods: The Empty Promises of Money, Sex, and Power, and the Only Hope that Matters. Dutton

Monday, 13 October 2025

Envy Redeemed

 

An Allegorical Poem in Three Movements

THE ARGUMENT

The Poet, musing on the torment of envy, conceives it as a fallen spirit, self-consumed and wandering through the wastes of the soul. Envy laments its curse before the bright Spirit of Charity, who rebukes and then redeems it. In the end, the fires of malice are turned to light, and the two ascend together toward the dawn of Grace.





i. THE VOICE OF ENVY

Lo, I arise from caverns of the mind,
Where never dawn hath shone, nor quiet dwelt.
I am the worm that feedeth on the root,
When yet the fruit is green upon the bough;
The canker hid, that drinketh of the sap,
And turneth sweetness into dust and gall.

ii. THE DIALOGUE OF ENVY AND CHARITY

ENVY
I wander as a shadow ’mid the blest,
A spirit self-consuming, bound in spite.

CHARITY
O child unblest, thou hast not known thy thirst.
It is not others’ plenty that condemns,
But thine own emptiness that maketh pain.

ENVY
I walk among them, yet I cannot rest,
Each joy I see doth wound my heart with fire.

CHARITY
Then yield thy stings; lay down thy fires to rest.
Their heat shall serve the altar, not the pit.

ENVY
Can such as I be turned to light and peace?

CHARITY
Yea, by contrition, by love’s gentle might.
Thy thousand serpents change to threads of light,
And every coil is loosed into a star.

ENVY
What grace is this? I feel the chains unbind,
The weight of many ages melt away.

iii. THE REDEMPTION OF ENVY

So shall it be for all who envy’s snare
Have felt, and by contrition are made clean.
For love is stronger than the serpent’s guile,
And mercy keepeth watch where pride is tamed.


A Miltonic riff

Oct 2025


Tuesday, 19 August 2025

Dragonfly Sonnet


Dragonfly


It is the cave of me, its emptiness,
Which hollows your own imperfections free.
The echo shapes a shadowed tenderness,
Where absence learns the art of memory.

Yet in the damp, where silence clings like stone,
A fragile nymph stirs restlessly unseen;
It dreams of wings it cannot call its own,
A shimmer waiting where the dark has been.

And so it breaks — the thin skin of the past,
Shedding the weight of oldness in the night;
The cave dissolves, its hold undone at last,
A body glimmers, born of hidden flight.

Innocent now, it hovers, fierce and small,
A dragonfly that knows no cave at all.



  • Produced with assistance of Co-Pilot AI

The original Poem

The Cave of Me
 
It’s the cave of me, its emptiness
That hollows your own imperfections free.
As if in the darkness of the internal soul
The streams of pure beauty flow like
Glistening rivulets procreant in unfathomed
Grottoes. 

The dragonfly was once
A grub in that darkness. We never
See his emergence. We see him skate and skim
And fly free, and have never seen the painful
Miracle of the shedding of oldness in darkness;
Thus, we were not given to that vision, the
Knowledge of which is too much to bear.
We were given to be like the dragonfly
Innocent and flying free.
 
Oxwich, Gower
October 1972

Sunday, 27 July 2025

A Kelling Memory

 



Autumn and winter days at our cottage in Kelling were marked occasionally by the arrival of guests of the Kelling estate. These guests - paying guests - came for the entertainment offered by the regular pheasant shoots. Here is a reflection, written as the spent pellets rained upon our cottage conservatory. It was completed in Oxfordshire sunshine a few days ago.

The Reluctant Sportsman

The guns speak a fate. Keep 
Brave as the birds break cover.
Squeeze the trigger. The flock in disarray
Hovers then darts loose over the fields.
Shame hinges on a miss. This
Is what we expected. The land over stiles
Marks an escape. I am reptile.

The guns settle. Held, not fired.
Brave as the birds break cover.
Finger stays curled. The flock in disarray
Hovers then darts loose over the fields.
No one sees the stillness. This
Is not what was expected. The land over stiles
Marks a passage. I stay human.

The grass parts. A rustle speaks.
Brave as the sky calls danger.
Muscle recalls the flint of air
As bodies scatter, low and rising.
A crack behind. Not struck. This
Time, still breathing. The land over stiles
Means a distance. I am creature.

Kelling October 2015/Oxon July 2025

  • Stanzas 2 and 3 developed with assistance of Co-Pilot AI

Treescape in Watercolour 2022



Saturday, 19 July 2025

Tracks: A Revision after a Decade

 


The tracks hold signs of wisdom planted
Full deep in the way. Here a flame
Burns and flickers, flickers, burns
And lights rocks against rock,
Another shadow, a different shade,
A shiver of memory thrust to mind.

At the broken stile, a figure stood.
Not stranger, not guide.
He said:
What you carry was not gathered,
But given—before the path began.

To survive in this wild place
In this wilderness scaffold, simply face
The shades as they speak of times made strange
By current tread.

The dead speak in fire,
Not in voice or name.
Hold fast to that light. It shines
Miraculous, though too often maligned.

 

-          -    Kelling July 2015/Oxon July 2025

  • Stanza 2 developed with  assistance of Co-Pilot AI, with reference to Eliot's "Compound ghost" in "Little Gidding"





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